Sunday, February 14, 2010

What else can we be...

It's raining outside.
How noisy it can be with no one around... rain, wind and trees !
Gate cracks outside, may be it's her.
May be she finally decided to visit me.

But there is no one.
Same wind playing game with me... again.

I don't know how long will it take her to understand.
May be she didn't recieve my messege... bt what if she did !

Why can't i just get lost in all these sounds, all these channels in the tv playing something which just seems like some more different noices to my mind.

Colours, so many colours, screen fulll of colours and yet nothing reaching me...
May be my mind stopped reacting else how come nothing reaches me...
I want to close my eyes and get lost in darkness where peace visits.

Ohh i hear something, what's that? Beats yeah... beats my heart beats, seems like trying to complete the marathon.
Wish i can just be sane for a moment closing windows against it. I wish.

I don't exactly remember how long i have been sitting like this, closing my eyes, trying to get lost in the darkness.

All I feel is her soft hairs, that sweet fresh smell she carries... i open my eyes and look around.
Is she really here....or is it a dream !

I try to speak...

I...
I know...
what ?
nothing..
then?
Which date is today...
wh...what?
which date is today?
14th why?
14th of??
14 of February...
so???
so???
Don't you want to ask me something?
what?
ummmm....
ya?
.....

She looks up... spots that smile on my face...
She smiles and tries to punch me but instead that ends her up in my arms.

I can feel her hair, her smell, her soft skin and before that feeling wraps me i have to say it...

Ammm arrr....mmm Will you be my Valentine?
****Smile***
What??.. will you?
......
Don't kill me...
yes ... always ... what else i can be !
ya, what else we can be !


Happy Valentines Day to you all !

Image : A Painting by Viv :)

14 comments:

AmitL said...

Oops- u nazar lagaoed me-I forgot the tag...but, if u see,I didn't post,last 3-4 days..some work here occupying full time..:)Aaj,pakka..be back in evening to check.
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Ohhh..rain in Holland-I was there in Amsterdam for just 2 days, some yrs back(2004,I believe), and it was lovely-temp @ 3-4 deg C and droplets of icy rain falling.

Pres├ępio no Canal said...

Happy Valentines Day! ;-) with all the colours of the world! ;-)

dev said...

Oh I so loved reading this! :) Happy Valentine's day, dear!

~ Lopa said...

@ AmitL

I have had enough chakkars checking it out...hehehe And then now i realise why those chakkars, i can just check in my blogs i follow tab if you had an update ;) hehe

Yeah, it is romantic when you are here for 2 days, but not when you live here. I find rain back home romantic, A few showers, smell and cold breeze ! Here it just keep dripping for days !

~ Lopa said...

@ Pres├ępio no Canal 

Thanks Sandra, Hope you had a great day ! :)

~ Lopa said...

@ dev 

Thanks thanks bf :) Hope you had a great day :) I saw a few updates on your blogs, will check it out soon :0)

Orangesplaash said...

Such a beautiful, romantic post..I loved the ending!! Makes me think of attempting a poetry one day :)

~ Lopa said...

@ Orangesplaash

Thanks Arwa :)
Aree " naiki aur puchh puchh? " what are you waiting for ? Yesterday was the best day to attempt it ;)
So how was your Valentine's Day? :)

Nithya said...

Love is in the air!! and your post brings in the freshness of it... Lovely post Lops...
Let every day be a beautiful celebration of valentines.

~ Lopa said...

@ Nithya

Thanks Nits, and i am happy you visited and commented, hehehe
Let everyday be a Valentine's Day, let everyday be a celebration of Love ! Amen :o)

Arunima said...

happi valentine shelentine kya horela re? :-)

Aledys Ver said...

How nice to read this! I hope you had a nice day! Do you celebrate Valentine's in your town in India?
By the way, I added a section in my blog where I've linked to your cooking blog ;o) and Lizzie's, Sonya's and a Spanish friend's, who lives in Groningen.
Ciao!!

~ Lopa said...

@ Arunima

nahi hone ko mangta kya???
Goa ghumna-shumna kaisa raha? ;)

~ Lopa said...

@ Aledys Ver 

Thanks Aledys,
Yes we celebrates Valentine's day in India.
When we were back in school it was more of our day, kind of craze between teenagers, but now i see more people celebrate it, but still normally young people.

That is so nice of you Aledys to do so :o)
We will have a tastier treat now.
Looking at enthusiastic reception of my blog, I think i shall throw an Indian treat for all my blog buddies in future, if that works out ;o)

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